42- Jimiki

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When the sky rains amrith and ambrosia

My jimiki catches the breeze and drops down,

Some day I am going to complain to Yashoda.

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A/N:

My first try at writing a japanese senryu.

I guess its not too bad.

There is a lot left unsaid in those lines. A lot left to your imagination. So do read and imagine and let me know your versions. 

*giggles* *innocent*

Yours,

Indeevara


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